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Posted on 26/10/11 7:45:26 PM

Jota120
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Chris, some of us love love and planes, if you wish make the plane a little smaller and desaturate/noise and some blur, as much as you wish. I have to go now.....

Posted on 26/10/11 7:55:13 PM

Deborah Morley
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Hello Chris, and now my turn. Really like the colouring of your poster. I think the image you last posted with the plane is right. My only thing is that her hair on the left hand side of the poster needs to blend in with the background a bit more. At the moment it looks a bit spikey.

Posted on 26/10/11 8:12:42 PM

Nick Curtain
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Hi Chris

Love the poster and agree with Deborah about the lighting - fabulous. Also agree there should be no smoke.

My only concern is that she's looking into the sky in another direction from the plane and at what?. I would have thought that she'd be looking at him flying away, in which case a rear view of a woman waiving might be more appropriate. Just a thought.

Nick

Posted on 27/10/11 08:46:47 AM

chris berry
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GKB wrote:
I think you're right Chris; it should be rather smaller than in my post. I think that the aircraft does need to be there because it emphasises that this character in the play is an RAF pilot.

Perhaps somewhere between your first post and mine might be a good compromise.

It's nearly there!

You're right. I think I'll silhouette your render!

Posted on 27/10/11 08:48:18 AM

chris berry
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Deborah Morley wrote:
Hello Chris, and now my turn. Really like the colouring of your poster. I think the image you last posted with the plane is right. My only thing is that her hair on the left hand side of the poster needs to blend in with the background a bit more. At the moment it looks a bit spikey.

Hi Deborah
The compression of this jpeg has lightened the whole image. The full res jpeg is darker, and the hair blends much more effectively.

Posted on 27/10/11 08:50:37 AM

chris berry
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Nick Curtain wrote:
Hi Chris

Love the poster and agree with Deborah about the lighting - fabulous. Also agree there should be no smoke.

My only concern is that she's looking into the sky in another direction from the plane and at what?. I would have thought that she'd be looking at him flying away, in which case a rear view of a woman waiving might be more appropriate. Just a thought.

Nick

Hi Nick
I did wonder if someone would comment on that. That's why the plane needs to be kept small. It's a background element. She is (supposed) to be looking into the middle distance - not at the plane.

Posted on 28/10/11 7:50:28 PM

Steve Caplin
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chris berry wrote:
She is (supposed) to be looking into the middle distance - not at the plane.

Ah. I did wonder about that. Well, perhaps she could be flipped the other way so she's clearly looking away from it? Otherwise, as Nick says, it does rather seem like she's trying to catch a glimpse of it over her shoulder.

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