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Posted on 23/07/07 4:43:31 PM
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How to look like sitting on the bed
How to look like sitting on the bed



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Posted on 26/07/07 07:14:33 AM
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Re: How to look like sitting on the bed
Not quite my style, but from a technical view I think it's very well done.

Some thoughts, but bear in mind I'm an amateur!

I think what's bugging me is that the white balance between the subject and the background is a bit off. The whites in her eyes should probaby match that of the pillows. Possibly the highlights on her left hand and hip as well...? The background is high-pass, high contrast...but the subject is medium contrast and soft.

Her right hand needs to tidy up a bit. Maybe some unsharp mask and clipping on the fuzzed out edge.

Also, the scale seems slightly off. As she is now, she could fit inside the pillowcase.

Her skin & hair looks a little plastic-like. Possibly adding a very small amount of texture or noise could make her more consistent with that of the background.

Nonetheless, still a very well done montage.

Posted on 26/07/07 12:35:49 PM
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Re: How to look like sitting on the bed
tank172 wrote:
Not quite my style, but from a technical view I think it's very well done.

Some thoughts, but bear in mind I'm an amateur!

I think what's bugging me is that the white balance between the subject and the background is a bit off. The whites in her eyes should probaby match that of the pillows. Possibly the highlights on her left hand and hip as well...? The background is high-pass, high contrast...but the subject is medium contrast and soft.

Her right hand needs to tidy up a bit. Maybe some unsharp mask and clipping on the fuzzed out edge.

Also, the scale seems slightly off. As she is now, she could fit inside the pillowcase.

Her skin & hair looks a little plastic-like. Possibly adding a very small amount of texture or noise could make her more consistent with that of the background.

Nonetheless, still a very well done montage.


Thank you for your suggestions
Analyse very detailedly

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