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Posted on 15/02/10 2:28:21 PM
chris berry
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Can you tell me what you think is happening
Hi chaps
A work in progress - ignore chopped up arms and stuff.
Can you tell me what you think he's doing?
I know what he's supposed to be doing, but my partner doesn't!

Cheers
Chris



Posted on 15/02/10 3:06:28 PM
Nick Curtain
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
Not very apparent to me Chris, have to admit.
Nick

Posted on 15/02/10 3:13:58 PM
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Well, he seems to be disappearing from the biceps.

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Posted on 15/02/10 3:40:55 PM
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
It seems like he is getting the person on the other end of the phone to listen to the city noise??

Posted on 15/02/10 3:46:39 PM
chris berry
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So it doesn't look like he's holding the phone to his head like a gun?

Posted on 15/02/10 3:58:07 PM
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Chris,
For that effect try getting him to hold the mouthpiece as if it was a pistol grip.

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Posted on 15/02/10 4:04:05 PM
chris berry
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
GKB wrote:
Chris,
For that effect try getting him to hold the mouthpiece as if it was a pistol grip.

Had thought of that but not sure if will work.
Maybe the idea's just flawed.


Posted on 15/02/10 4:12:24 PM
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En français, ça ira??
Je vois un homme qui est tellement harcelé par le téléphone qu'il devient un téléphone et qu'il veut en finir....

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Posted on 15/02/10 5:08:37 PM
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
I think having two fingers pointing along the handset, towards his head, could make the gun idea work...

Posted on 15/02/10 5:13:21 PM
chris berry
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
Steve Caplin wrote:
I think having two fingers pointing along the handset, towards his head, could make the gun idea work...


Thanks Steve
Will try that and post it.

Posted on 16/02/10 08:50:05 AM
Nick Curtain
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Chris
I think it's important to understand what you are trying to convey with this approach. There may be more than one way of illustrating this.

If the man was facing us and his eyes were closed tightly, i.e. in anticipation of the phone firing, then that might make the message clearer.

I see people holding mobile phones like this all the time, why I don't know, but they are always the type who talk loudly on trains.

Nick


Posted on 16/02/10 09:12:29 AM
chris berry
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Re: Can you tell me what you think is happening
Nick Curtain wrote:
Chris
I think it's important to understand what you are trying to convey with this approach. There may be more than one way of illustrating this.

If the man was facing us and his eyes were closed tightly, i.e. in anticipation of the phone firing, then that might make the message clearer.

I see people holding mobile phones like this all the time, why I don't know, but they are always the type who talk loudly on trains.

Nick


Like your thinking, Nick.
Will try Steve's idea first, because I don't like showing faces on posters unless they're stars. I can put my finger on it, but when you show a face it seems to kill the mystery? Will post the result to see what you think.

Thanks again!

Chris


Posted on 16/02/10 10:05:53 PM
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I'm sorry, but the problem's with the shadow on the arm, from the head/torso. The arm is obviously forward from the 'head' and thus it doesn't look as if the phone is on the same plane as the head.

Plus if it was being forced into his temple, the hair would be moved about a bit.

Posted on 17/02/10 08:20:22 AM
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That's a good point, Ocker. It's also that the position of the hand makes it look as if he's holding the phone in front of him, resting against the window.

To press the phone to his head, I think he'd have to twist the arm so the thumb is pointing up, not down. Try it, you'll see what I mean.

Posted on 17/02/10 09:03:33 AM
Nick Curtain
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I think the phone receiver is placed too far to the left. The guy has short hair and the temple, to which the gun would be held, is fairly flush with the ear. In it's present position, the impression is the the receiver is being held in front of his forehead.

Posted on 24/02/10 6:48:06 PM
Paul 2007 thru 2010
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To me it looked like he was going to lift up the blind with his thumb to look through it.
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