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Posted on 10/10/11 1:59:19 PM |
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marlcliff
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someting to create over the weekend
my friend Joanne hope i got the perspectives better  _________________ My wife told me: "Just because your blind dont use it as an excuss not to see something." |
Posted on 13/10/11 10:31:18 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: someting to create over the weekend
Yes - perspective is good in this image. A few points: If the flowers and butterflies in the foreground were more out of focus, it would give a much greater depth to the image. There are three blue butterflies on the right at exactly the same angle. This makes them look artificial. Rotate at least one of them a little, and change the scale slightly. The woman is very highly contrasted compared to the background, which makes her look as if she doesn't really belong there. Brighten those shadows - the blacks in the background are no more than darkish brown. Steve |
Posted on 13/10/11 6:43:32 PM |
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marlcliff
Knight of Intrigue Posts: 171 Reply |
Re: someting to create over the weekend
Thanks Steve go mee perspective lol heh, i only added the flowers to hid the bad cutting out of the feet that bad attention to minor details i need to pick up on. hope the wifes not reading this lol but looking closely at the girl i can see what you mean about the contrast she does stand out from the background. darn butterflies i did tell em to spread out betterback to photoshop 
thanks for the advice apreaciated cheers phill _________________ My wife told me: "Just because your blind dont use it as an excuss not to see something." |
Posted on 13/10/11 9:19:52 PM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: someting to create over the weekend
Always glad to help, Phill. And as for the flowers hiding the feet - good move! An ingenious solution. |
Posted on 14/10/11 00:17:19 AM |
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marlcliff
Knight of Intrigue Posts: 171 Reply |
Re: someting to create over the weekend
thanks Steve vertion 2 
_________________ My wife told me: "Just because your blind dont use it as an excuss not to see something." |
Posted on 14/10/11 07:29:37 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: someting to create over the weekend
Yes! |