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Posted on 03/11/04 07:49:56 AM |
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Martin Kimeldorf
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feedback on this montage-cartoon
Tonight America voted...I think they voted away their future. it was beyond words. So I went to the screen to see what I could come up with. It involved a close up of a mouth that was treated with various filters, followed by an attempt to lay ol george in the middle of a scream...then finish with adapted lines to America the Beautiful song. So now you know the source of my pixel catharsis. Anyways, you folks had some very good input on a previous montage i did, so thought i'd run this one by you...  _________________ Longevity is highly over-rated. |
Posted on 03/11/04 3:40:44 PM |
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FP
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Re: feedback on this montage-cartoon
Maybe reduce the size of George to look like he's in the mouth - coming up from the throat like a scream would. Sorry Martin, I've never been a fan of distorted text unless it has something to 'anchor' to in the image - a shape, a curve, a border etc. Anyhow, here's my take on the reduction of George.  |