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Posted on 27/07/06 07:48:32 AM |
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SnowDog
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Mobeus Chick
Here's an experiment that went wrong? umm err right??  |
Posted on 31/07/06 10:22:41 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: Mobeus Chick
I really like this one. I think the only problem, really, is the hard corners at some of the joins. The bottom right section of shell flows smoothly into the red inner behind; the others are all a little too pointy, I'd say. Other than that, I'd take another look at the shadow - it's the shadow of a solid egg, not the one you've drawn - and I think I'd reconsider the colour of the inside. The red's rather overpowering! |
Posted on 02/08/06 4:12:15 PM |
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SnowDog
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Re: Mobeus Chick
Thanks for the pointers Steve. I'll have a go at trying to fix some of those things up. SnowDog |