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Posted on 06/11/11 7:04:34 PM |
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laddition
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La falaise( the cliff)
May this picture please you!   _________________ Mais je me connais, je lâcherais pas l'affaire.... Je vais piquer de grève comme on pique une colère... Plus têtue que tous les vieil homme et la mer... Pour que continue le combat ordinaire! |
Posted on 06/11/11 7:32:54 PM |
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dejá_vu
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Re: La falaise( the cliff)
Hello Laddition, I like the overall picture, the ambience, very melancolic a little "gothic" I like this kind of scenes but I have only a couple of things to point at:
The Vignete darkening (I don´t know if it's the right way to name that kind of darkening around the main subject, excuse my poor english). I think it's (a little) too much dark and, despite the fact that really focus the attention over the woman, makes me difficult to follow the perspective (the right area, being at the same distance away from the light is much lighter) and takes out some of the realism of the image. It seems to me like if the first left third of the image was underexposed by mistake on the photo lab Perhaps the same effect but not so "into" the picture were enough to give the same sensation of darkness and mysticism.
And the last one, the girl seems to me like floating over the ground especially on the area under the left leg and a little unther the chest. I think that with a couple os strokes of a dark diffuse brush will be enough to make her lying on the floor. I like it very much anyway. I'm a little gothic in my heart 
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Posted on 07/11/11 7:08:36 PM |
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laddition
femme fatale Posts: 585 Reply |
Re: La falaise( the cliff)
Hello, Deja-Vu Thank you very much for saying what you think I'm not as good as i want, on photoshop, i try, i try very hard, but it's always the same thing... perspective and light! In french, we say "mes bêtes noires"  _________________ Mais je me connais, je lâcherais pas l'affaire.... Je vais piquer de grève comme on pique une colère... Plus têtue que tous les vieil homme et la mer... Pour que continue le combat ordinaire! |
Posted on 07/11/11 9:58:06 PM |
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Jota120
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Re: La falaise( the cliff)
Your perspective is very good these days. (Little Trev) We enjoyed cycling in FFCT le Flur, sorry you could not make it  |
Posted on 08/11/11 8:22:31 PM |
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dejá_vu
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Re: La falaise( the cliff)
I agree with jota120. perspective is good enough. Only the shadows needed a little touch _________________ Thank god for the google translator to help me not to make too many mistakes |
Posted on 09/11/11 07:18:35 AM |
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laddition
femme fatale Posts: 585 Reply |
Re: La falaise( the cliff)
_________________ Mais je me connais, je lâcherais pas l'affaire.... Je vais piquer de grève comme on pique une colère... Plus têtue que tous les vieil homme et la mer... Pour que continue le combat ordinaire! |