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Posted on 11/12/11 10:56:40 PM |
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ahmedalij
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THE RUINS
I HOPE ITS INTERESTING    |
Posted on 12/12/11 9:41:44 PM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: THE RUINS
Certainly interesting, yes. But perhaps lacking a central focus? There's so much going on, but the eye jumps all around the picture. You need to tell a story, to lead the viewer through the piece... as it stands, it's hard to take in the scale, what with the greatly differing sizes and perspectives. If the focus is the building on the hilltop, perhaps some beams of light coming out of it? |
Posted on 13/12/11 08:45:34 AM |
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ahmedalij
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Re: THE RUINS
Thank you Mr. Caplin for your nice review & I am working according to it .   |
Posted on 13/12/11 11:20:08 AM |
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ahmedalij
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Re: THE RUINS
I HOPE ITS FOCUSED NOW.  |
Posted on 13/12/11 1:10:48 PM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: THE RUINS
That makes more sense! |
Posted on 13/12/11 4:05:37 PM |
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ahmedalij
Atmosphysician Posts: 262 Reply |
Re: THE RUINS
Thanks again Mr. Caplin. |
Posted on 15/12/11 07:40:05 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: THE RUINS
You're welcome. Oh, and it's Steve - the only people who call me Mr Caplin are policemen and my son's teachers! |