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Posted on 24/12/09 6:40:48 PM |
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Jono
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Opening my door
What do you think of this? Original sources: http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n126/Jdeadevil/DSCI0044.jpg http://www.luminous-landscape.com/images-10/yellow-field-8470-thumb.jpg  |
Posted on 21/01/10 07:58:54 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: Opening my door
The door opening is excellent - very convincing. But there are problems with the view through it. First, it's much too high. The angles of the top and middle of the door show the perspective, and so point to the horizon which is much lower than where you have it. Second, the texture of the crops/flowers at the front is too large. This is a view taken from close up; you need a more distant view altogether. And third, the view is far more saturated than the interior, which makes it look out of place. Lower the saturation, and it won't jump out so much. |
Posted on 21/01/10 07:58:55 AM |
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Steve Caplin
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Re: Opening my door
The door opening is excellent - very convincing. But there are problems with the view through it. First, it's much too high. The angles of the top and middle of the door show the perspective, and so point to the horizon which is much lower than where you have it. Second, the texture of the crops/flowers at the front is too large. This is a view taken from close up; you need a more distant view altogether. And third, the view is far more saturated than the interior, which makes it look out of place. Lower the saturation, and it won't jump out so much. |
Posted on 29/04/10 11:41:27 PM |
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Jono
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Re: Opening my door
Aghh, forgot about this thread, sorry Steve. I'll remember for next time I have a similir project. Thanks  |